On Atley’s Page –
Blog #1: I like how you told about what was going on with both characters. It was nice that you informed the readers that Caleb had been in jail for a year. This book seems to be exciting and eventful. I also like how you didn’t spoil the whole book or the whole first half of the book. You left the readers wondering. I thought that was really good. I will be sure to read it.
Blog #2: You had really good pictures. I have not read the book you are currently reading but the pictures and captions make me want to read it. The pictures seem to really describe what is really going on in the book. I think it seems like a very interesting book. The book you are reading seems pretty exciting. The book seems pretty good to read, and would keep most people’s interest.
On Hannah’s Page-
Blog #1: Hannah, you have done a good job on your blog. I didn't know that you were a sophomore or even 15. So I learned something new. Your book seems good, I might just read it. It seems pretty interesting but you will probably want to add more detail and examples in your other blogs. It was still good but maybe adds a little more detail. Keep up the good work and hope you enjoy your book.
Blog #1: I like how you told about what was going on with both characters. It was nice that you informed the readers that Caleb had been in jail for a year. This book seems to be exciting and eventful. I also like how you didn’t spoil the whole book or the whole first half of the book. You left the readers wondering. I thought that was really good. I will be sure to read it.
Blog #2: You had really good pictures. I have not read the book you are currently reading but the pictures and captions make me want to read it. The pictures seem to really describe what is really going on in the book. I think it seems like a very interesting book. The book you are reading seems pretty exciting. The book seems pretty good to read, and would keep most people’s interest.
On Hannah’s Page-
Blog #1: Hannah, you have done a good job on your blog. I didn't know that you were a sophomore or even 15. So I learned something new. Your book seems good, I might just read it. It seems pretty interesting but you will probably want to add more detail and examples in your other blogs. It was still good but maybe adds a little more detail. Keep up the good work and hope you enjoy your book.
Malika’s Blog:
Blog #1: Malika, I like how you told the names of the people and how they related to the story. You also put her sister in your blog, which is good. I think your book seems interesting. You seem to enjoy it already. It seems like a good book to read. You will have to let me know how it is. Also you have really good detail in your paragraph. Well, hope you enjoy your book. I look forward to seeing your other blogs. Bye. (:
Blog #2: Great job on the pictures! You really seem to have told the main points in the story. I like how you gave the sister, in the wheel chair, a part in the pictures. I like how you put pictures of Brittany and Alex. Even though they weren’t together at the beginning of the story didn’t mean anything. And I really like that you put the two pictures of Alex and Brittany in the blog. Good job with the pictures Malika! (;
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